Tuesday, 10 April 2012

ODE


When we will be there alone,
Hidden in her shelter will be winter crone,
Breeze would be crossing us soothingly,
Playing ardent love tune,
On my heart’s chord amazingly,
Concealed sun will gently peep through cloud,
We would bask and will sing aloud,
Life’s soul and nature’s heart will surround us,
Love is all that will be around us,

We two will be sitting alongside,
Holding hands, looking into each other’s eyes, 
Then we will start chanting and will go on for hours,
 I will place my head in her lap,
And she would be caressing my hairs,
With her sleek little fingers,
And that affectionate touch of her fingers,
On my face would make me feel,
On top of this world,
Magical scent of her body,
Would be driving me crazy,
No place for distrust, rudeness, anger,
Life’s soul and nature’s heart will surround us,
Love is all that will be around us,

They think our relation is in a state of crude,
But I know you will never misunderstand me,
 And I promise I won’t ever be rude
No sorrows in our heart, Grief’s would be extrude,
You won’t be perverted, I’ll not be in delude,
Between mind and heart there won’t be any feud,
Kisses we do now would just be prelude,
To the beautiful moments, in future, we will brood,
Life’s soul and nature’s heart will surround us,
Love is all that will be around us,

DHRUVANSH KRATI

20 comments:

  1. Thank you for checking out my work.
    You write really well :)

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    1. thank u ...thanks a lot...
      your words of appreciation means a lot....
      keep visiting.........
      i will be looking forward to have your valuable comments now and then.....

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    1. i think u actually read what i was trying to say..
      keep visiting.....
      thanks a ton :)

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  3. wowwwwwwwwwww..literally wowwwww..
    so damn romantic.. a soul touching 1..
    loved it 4m d bottom of my heart..
    keep up d great job man..
    sky wil b d limit for u..hatts off :) _/\_

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    1. m really really overwhelmed by response......
      i penned in from core of my heart.....m ecstatic that u loved it..
      a great compliment for me.....
      thanks

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  4. lovely poem, Dhruv
    looking forward to reading many more of your poems

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  5. thank u........for visiting my blog i loved that fact that u find my creation lovely.....will be back soon with many more...keep visiting now and then....

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  6. well dats like A-W-E-S-O-M-E................
    LOVED IT..it feels love is in da air wen i read it..realy gd wrk..n deserves...bst :) keep it up :)

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    1. it feels great to have such a nice view from one so creative....
      Thanks... keep visiting now and then..

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  7. Beautifully composed poem....:)

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    1. thank u...... very much for stopping by.....keep visiting...now and then....
      :)

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  8. wow reading dis i juz went in sum other world.... love was never defined so cutely b4....

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    1. i think soul of a poem resides in reader's interpretation......
      ...u felt the soul i guess.........
      thanks a ton...for stopping by and for your valuable comment.....keep visiting now and then.....
      :)

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  9. hello Dhruv..
    firstly thanks 4 visiting me and giving me the opportunity to land here.. lovely blog u have :)

    ODE of love u weaved is awesome..
    the desire of eternal love and the enjoyment it involves is very well expressed.. !!

    hope to c u more at Random Scribblings..
    n m looking forward to more new posts from u !!

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    1. hey Jyoti
      it was my pleasure to be there at RANDOM SCRIBBLING......i will be there at random scribbling to read lovely scribble all flickering thoughts banging your head every now and then.......
      m really thankful to you for stopping by and for giving such a nice compliment......
      there will be many more very soon.....
      keep visiting now and then.....

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  10. Wow..truly amazing
    Keep up the good work Dhruv...
    God bless :)

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    1. thank u......thanx a ton
      may your wish come true and i keep on doing good work.
      keep visiting now and then........ :)

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  11. superb sirjee...,,

    think so it wont increase the english literature syllabus of 5-10 standard..,,
    simply superb

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  12. you expressed well about her and him.
    and I'd like to day both he and she experienced well with your writing :)

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